tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post7805790888035552323..comments2024-02-12T15:15:51.364+02:00Comments on The Five Year Project: Show me yours...Misha Gerrickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-26049207407955814252011-01-05T09:02:30.899+02:002011-01-05T09:02:30.899+02:00Thanks Colene, Golden, Jodi and Margo. :-)
L'...Thanks Colene, Golden, Jodi and Margo. :-)<br /><br />L'Aussi I can't be all nice... ;-P<br /><br />Chris, thanks lots for the crit. I'll pay extra attention to this scene when I get to it, since it pretty much makes the ending possible. I want the scene to unfold to the reader with a growing sense of dread, since by that time, green-eyes (Gawain) and silent (Darrion) will be well known to them and they tend not to be nice to gullible strangers with a desired object in their possession...Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-16144010095032573412011-01-05T08:51:00.428+02:002011-01-05T08:51:00.428+02:00I like the names! I was totally drawn in for some ...I like the names! I was totally drawn in for some reason :) Hopefully I'll get to read more with time! Thanks for posting.Jessica Silvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15405267450788581689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-74649210851489126952011-01-05T04:20:46.285+02:002011-01-05T04:20:46.285+02:00Great post! :)Great post! :)Margo Kellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13474612650116392270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-43650594675132193502011-01-05T02:01:40.606+02:002011-01-05T02:01:40.606+02:00Well, I'm certainly intrigued about what the k...Well, I'm certainly intrigued about what the keys (and implied doors) do. I was a little confused when I first ready it, didn't realize until the end that the 'green-eyed man' and his friend are also major characters, just meeting James and Ward for the first time.<br /><br />None of the characters has quite won me over yet, and the voice may need some work yet. But I wish you much luck with 'Doorways.' Thanks for remembering the blogfest!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-64842739317752414162011-01-05T00:38:09.744+02:002011-01-05T00:38:09.744+02:00Great entry. Sorry I didn't get to it yesterda...Great entry. Sorry I didn't get to it yesterday:)<br />JJodi Henryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03216373059861459896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-67285616462355501132011-01-04T22:42:59.907+02:002011-01-04T22:42:59.907+02:00This is a great blogfest entry. Nasty of you to fi...This is a great blogfest entry. Nasty of you to finish there and leave us hanging! Glad you entered!Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-50359942086582688042011-01-04T21:45:25.851+02:002011-01-04T21:45:25.851+02:00I loved reading your blogfest entry! Your book sou...I loved reading your blogfest entry! Your book sounds amazing.Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-1398956085375918722011-01-04T18:36:35.231+02:002011-01-04T18:36:35.231+02:00Awesome entry! Really nice job!! Interested to see...Awesome entry! Really nice job!! Interested to see what happens next for sure!Colene Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06086195075690893194noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-57327707860090141772011-01-04T16:38:10.994+02:002011-01-04T16:38:10.994+02:00Thanks Tracy. :-)
Thanks Ellie, maybe one day, I&...Thanks Tracy. :-)<br /><br />Thanks Ellie, maybe one day, I'll post more, although it's hard to pick bits without them being spoilers. ;-)<br /><br />Rebecca you're pretty much right, but not quite. And yes... James just landed him and Ward in a world of trouble. ;-)Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-33276843691550330372011-01-04T16:10:20.885+02:002011-01-04T16:10:20.885+02:00Interesting - I'm guessing the keys are like c...Interesting - I'm guessing the keys are like connections between worlds or dimensions or something? Quite intriguing. It looks like they're in a bit of trouble now!Rebecca T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/11994380364321336824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-68920144158401732942011-01-04T12:17:42.385+02:002011-01-04T12:17:42.385+02:00A gripping read! I echo Tracy Z's comment, thi...A gripping read! I echo Tracy Z's comment, this line is great, "They could take us straight to hell, for all we knew," the silent one spoke up, his attention fixed on the glass of whiskey turning slowly between his fingers.<br /><br />Eager to read more!Ellie Garratthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03731071128348213067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-57813539941579292532011-01-04T11:54:50.422+02:002011-01-04T11:54:50.422+02:00I have heard of blogfests throughout the holiday s...I have heard of blogfests throughout the holiday season and had no idea what they were/are so I will definitely check out the one you have listed since I too have participated in NaNoWriMo.<br /><br />Your 500 words definitely has me curious what in the world those keys are for and where they will lead. I loved the line about possibly leading them straight to hell. Good work!Ava Z.https://www.blogger.com/profile/14396315936946338742noreply@blogger.com