tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post5071562997023613447..comments2024-02-12T15:15:51.364+02:00Comments on The Five Year Project: Flash Fiction BlogfestMisha Gerrickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-80513070194209836162012-05-25T02:23:54.565+02:002012-05-25T02:23:54.565+02:00This is so sad :(This is so sad :(Heather Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11847855601653718033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-81753982054490249132012-05-25T02:12:31.868+02:002012-05-25T02:12:31.868+02:00Nice story! I like how you divided it into paragra...Nice story! I like how you divided it into paragraphs, especially when the single word "love" is just written on its own. The whole story is more powerful that way. Well done!Beckyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11011299516506991999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-37914011709804398902012-05-24T19:01:48.361+02:002012-05-24T19:01:48.361+02:00Such a tense piece packed into so few words. Great...Such a tense piece packed into so few words. Great job!<br /><br />I'll announce the finalists on Friday.Cherie Reichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16663147386014122939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-77767506490116880082012-05-24T15:49:18.712+02:002012-05-24T15:49:18.712+02:00I read this earlier, but my laptop seems to be hav...I read this earlier, but my laptop seems to be having some internet connection issues, so I'm not sure I commented.<br />So, finally . . .<br />Beautiful, intense flash with loads of imagery!Tyrean Martinsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15356604721537744361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-71797724958521890382012-05-24T13:38:30.216+02:002012-05-24T13:38:30.216+02:00Excellent imagery in this! I love the impending ap...Excellent imagery in this! I love the impending apocalyptic tones :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02548680159204361401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-3178866440452107332012-05-24T11:24:25.464+02:002012-05-24T11:24:25.464+02:00Wow, I love how she just waits for it. "Where...Wow, I love how she just waits for it. "Where would I run?" That takes some inner strength.Charity Bradfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01960821077619680661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-21801620466553450092012-05-24T09:40:34.371+02:002012-05-24T09:40:34.371+02:00Some great imagery, quite enjoyed this little piec...Some great imagery, quite enjoyed this little piece,<br />though did you mean "rising to its full height"?sjphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05772883091207430753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-8165310684130681812012-05-24T06:26:50.287+02:002012-05-24T06:26:50.287+02:00I know it's been said, but I have to repeat it...I know it's been said, but I have to repeat it. Powerful is the perfect word for this. It just hits so hard. Thanks.VonLCidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05792116471895008377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-13404823077374201372012-05-23T16:46:36.284+02:002012-05-23T16:46:36.284+02:00The flash fiction was awesome. I love the details ...The flash fiction was awesome. I love the details in the description. The way you describe things certainly sets the mood. Thanks for sharing.Jessica L. Celayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13725283349220405323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-83060899342781486382012-05-23T16:12:58.351+02:002012-05-23T16:12:58.351+02:00Ooh it gave me tingles, very good :)Ooh it gave me tingles, very good :)PRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18081495393769749459noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-18650859823206849692012-05-23T14:07:55.572+02:002012-05-23T14:07:55.572+02:00I liked this piece, chilling, dark, and well writt...I liked this piece, chilling, dark, and well written. I especially enjoyed the cobra imagery! (:Elise Fallsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14734537117333738468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-85509597862218700952012-05-23T13:44:23.778+02:002012-05-23T13:44:23.778+02:00Awesome. Easily connects with reader. I want to kn...Awesome. Easily connects with reader. I want to know more.Traci Kenworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07336373871521363649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-18561656923550661882012-05-23T12:18:35.438+02:002012-05-23T12:18:35.438+02:00Oh, that's chilling, Misha. I wanted to yell f...Oh, that's chilling, Misha. I wanted to yell for your character to run.Ciarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15628488753277495111noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-85621739675370632842012-05-23T06:50:44.130+02:002012-05-23T06:50:44.130+02:00Powerful ending and so sad. Nice entry!Powerful ending and so sad. Nice entry!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03060064276650474244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-31901007997299565772012-05-23T04:43:02.925+02:002012-05-23T04:43:02.925+02:00Whoa! That really gave me chills! Part of me despe...Whoa! That really gave me chills! Part of me desperately wants to know how it came about but another part of me thinks it's way scarier to *not* know. Brava!<br /><br /><a href="http://minalobo.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Some Dark Romantic</a>Mina Lobohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10173895884776280826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-62113078488984734162012-05-23T03:04:48.134+02:002012-05-23T03:04:48.134+02:00Incredible flash piece. I could almost feel the st...Incredible flash piece. I could almost feel the storm bearing down on me as I read it. Bravo!Christine Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263694662585963900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-68366543326180065022012-05-23T02:30:11.416+02:002012-05-23T02:30:11.416+02:00Wow! What a powerful story to have your character ...Wow! What a powerful story to have your character literally facing death.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00823616282284779390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-41672185278975137772012-05-23T01:07:51.424+02:002012-05-23T01:07:51.424+02:00I may never view thunderstorms the same way again....I may never view thunderstorms the same way again.farawayeyeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17578277501054242356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-78816871345064903892012-05-23T01:06:54.198+02:002012-05-23T01:06:54.198+02:00How terrible it would be to see death approaching ...How terrible it would be to see death approaching like that...but I like that this story serves as a reminder that in the end, love is what we will remember most and what will be most regretted if it was missing in life. Well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-17260439741864959862012-05-23T01:05:34.955+02:002012-05-23T01:05:34.955+02:00Powerful image, and sad!
Allison (Geek Banter)Powerful image, and sad!<br /><br />Allison (<a href="http://www.alsgeekbanter.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Geek Banter</a>)Allisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02586970076965983267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-49880970089045288712012-05-23T00:49:23.612+02:002012-05-23T00:49:23.612+02:00Great story Misha. I really loved the imagery from...Great story Misha. I really loved the imagery from such powerful metaphors. Death as a cobra! How awesome is that?Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-72919851487845047762012-05-22T23:32:46.904+02:002012-05-22T23:32:46.904+02:00That's a powerful story!That's a powerful story!Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-1350506355462003172012-05-22T23:10:11.136+02:002012-05-22T23:10:11.136+02:00This is awesome and so powerful! Gave me chills wh...This is awesome and so powerful! Gave me chills while I was reading. Great work. :)Julie Flandershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05003737491313673214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-84077915095374331932012-05-22T21:19:32.859+02:002012-05-22T21:19:32.859+02:00Very intense and powerful! I like the "love. ...Very intense and powerful! I like the "love. Loved. Love." repetition. :)Laurenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15292139796803739003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190412120537448720.post-2138679852867638642012-05-22T20:50:04.640+02:002012-05-22T20:50:04.640+02:00Very powerful piece. The last thoughts of a bomb a...Very powerful piece. The last thoughts of a bomb attack victim perhaps...but could be any other dozen scenarios.Rek Seshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13484322426994645221noreply@blogger.com